How Internet Works
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How internet works
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Summary
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Thesis statement
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- Definition of Internet
- Thesis statement : This essay will explore about the advantages and disadvantages of using internet. |
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Main idea
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Advantages of using
internet:
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Allows
greater communication between people.
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Provides
entertainment and information through online news.
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Provides
educations such as e-book, tutorial.
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Main idea
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Disadvantages of using
internet:
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Social
isolation including online game addiction
- online gambling.
- Hoax news or Fraud.
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Conclusion
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In conclusion, internet provides many
convenience for modern life but we can see that there the advantages of using
internet such as allows greater communication between all the people,
provides entertainment and information and provides the education. While the
disadvantages are social isolation that includes gaming addiction, online gambling and hoax news. In my opinion, internet is something that is
beneficial. However, internet could also leads to both good and bad things
depending on how we use it.
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How Internet Works?
Internet is a worldwide of interconnect network that connect systems across the world. The internet has one very simple job, to move information (known as data) from one place from another. However, internet also has good and bad sides. This essay will explore about the advantages and disadvantages of using internet.
First, the advantages of using internet allows us greater communication between people. Consequently, people can stay connected to each other even tough they are far away, it helps people specially to those who has a long distance relationships. Second is provides the entertainment and information trough online news. As a result of this, we can easily update our news trough our phone, tablet or laptop trough the application or website that provides news and entertainment such as kompas.com, Netflix and many others. Third is provide the education such as tutorial in youtube, information from google and e-book. Because of this, many people can easily study and doing their homework trough information that they can access from google by using internet and they can read the book by download it from e-book.
Internet also has a disadvantages for people. First, Social isolation. There is an addiction for everything that pertains to the web and that includes gaming addiction. Therefore, these addictions create both physical as well as mental issues that can lead to health complications. Second is online gambling, it is also includes in social isolation, internet makes gambling increase to worldwide and easily to access. For that reason, it can also lead to addiction and cause the users lose their money until it goes bankrupt. Third, hoax news or fraud, Free content that can be created and disseminated through the Internet also makes the emergence of fraudulent content. As a result of this, Scammers are gaining new opportunities and ways of launching their attacks on their victims. Fraud content such as a contest site, where the Internet user is declared victorious, must first transfer some funds to a particular account, to be able to withdraw the prizes that will be given.
In conclusion, internet provides many convenience for modern life and we can see that there the advantages of using internet such as allows greater communication between all the people, provides the entertainment or news and provides the education. While the disadvantages of using internet are social isolation, online gambling and hoax news. In my opinion, internet is something that is beneficial. However, internet could also leads to both good and bad things depending on how we use it.
In conclusion, internet provides many convenience for modern life and we can see that there the advantages of using internet such as allows greater communication between all the people, provides the entertainment or news and provides the education. While the disadvantages of using internet are social isolation, online gambling and hoax news. In my opinion, internet is something that is beneficial. However, internet could also leads to both good and bad things depending on how we use it.
Nice essay
ReplyDeleteNice topic, really great.
ReplyDeleteGood essay
ReplyDeleteI think in your outline, the color its not same with others
ReplyDeleteIt's good essay Fabio. But is it correct in second paragraph there is many word of 'trough' ? Which word that want to use 'through' isn't it? I'm sorry if it's my misunderstood... hehe
ReplyDeletegood essay , maybe you can give the advice or the solution base on your opinion to people who have addicted to the internet. thankyou
ReplyDeleteDont forget to give your opinion Fabio
ReplyDeleteNice one. Keep up the good work, Fabio!
ReplyDeleteHi Fabio, I think you could use the question for the title, since this essay is about advantage and disadvantage of internet and not about how internet works, anyway, it's a good essay
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