Glass Production and Glass Recycling
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Introduction
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Paraphrasing the title
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Overview
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The process consists of nine stages, which separated into four stages
of glass production and five stages of glass recycling
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Production process
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Feature 2
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Recycling process
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The diagrams show the way storages, such as bottles, are produced and converted into another product.
Overall, the process consists of nine stages
which then separated into two parts. It consists of four stages of glass
production, beginning with the materials mixing and ending up with the finished
product. And it consists of five stages of glass recycling, starting with
collecting the used glass, and ending up with moulding it into a recycled
product.
First of all, the sand, soda ash, limestone,
and other chemicals are mixed. Then, the mixed materials undergo the melting
process in the glass furnace where they are heated to a temperature around 1500
oC. Before the storages are finished and ready for use, the molten
glasses are blown to a specific shape.
In the second part, the used glasses are
collected. Then they are sorted based on their colour. After that, the sorted
glasses are washed to remove their impurities. Following this, the glasses are
then melted and crushed. Finally, the glasses are moulded into a new product.
Clear explanayion and no mistake,good job broo
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