Government
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Should government fund
free healthcare through taxes or should citizens pay themselves with private
health insurance?
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Summary
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Introduction
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- Definition of government
- point of government should provide the free healthcare - Thesis statement : In this topic we will discuss about why government has to provide the free healthcare for their poor society through taxes. |
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Main idea 1
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People have right to live,
because in UU number 36 year 2009 explain that health is a human right.
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Main idea 2
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Helping poor people,
because all humanity should help each other.
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Main Idea 3
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Government have the obligation to provide the healthcare, because they need to care for their
population.
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Government already paid a lot of taxes such as military, scholarships and many others. But it is their duty to provide the healthcare.
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Conclusion
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In conclusion, the government should
provide the free healthcare through taxes, because health is a human right,
helping poor people and the government have the obligation to care their society.
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Government is a group of political that has the authority to control or govern a political society. Being a good government means to provide good things to the society such as providing free healthcare through taxes. In this topic, we will discuss about why government has to provide free healthcare for their poor society through taxes.
First, people who live in the country deserve to get an adequate health services provided by the government. According to Indonesian's Law no.36 year 2009, 'health is a human right and one of the country's welfare essential that has to be manifested.'
Second, in all humanity, it is our job to help each other. Once, an American speaker, author, and motivational speaker named Jim Rohn said,"Only by a giving are you able to receive more than you already have." Because I believe that the world is one big family, and we need to help each other.
Third, the government have the obligation to provide the healthcare, because they need to care for their society. Because the society is the future of the country. Therefore, without an adequate healthcare, they would not be able to live thier life at their potential.
Government already paid a lot of taxes such as military, scholarships and many others, so they didn't have to provide the free healthcare. But, I think that the government has to prioritize the health of their society because the people need to have a good healthcare to live their life so they can become the future of the country.
In conclusion, the government should provide the free healthcare through taxes because health is a human right, and it is our job to help the poor people, and the government have the obligation to care for their society.
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